MellowScholar's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tom's Wedding Day!]

Pretty nice.

The artwork was pretty good, I like the style. But I'd enjoy it more if a few things were different. I thought that the characters were a little static, they should move and gesture a bit as they speak. The music needed to be a bit quieter in parts and the voices more emotive so they'd be easier to hear. Overall it was nice, be great if it was longer. Well done on the frontpage.

Rudy responds:

Thank you. I think it hit Front Page since it's for Tom's wedding and all -- but that's probably really the real reason.

[La'Film Noir]

Nice idea.

But here's some pointers:
-Try not to use FLAs, it's nice when the styles match, it gives the movie a more unified feel,
-Definitely needs subtitles and for the music to be quieter, I'm used to speakonia and I could barely understand the characters,
-Your 'old movie effect' movie clip needs more frames and subtlety.

It seems like a lot but I'm just trying to help.

SandRaspberryClock responds:

I will try my best to fo so in the next one.

[Hiroshima and You]

Hmmm

I like this for some reason but I wish some things were different, like the sound quality could be better.
Also, how did this get you any marks for your japanese class? Just out of interest.
Good fun though, I liked it.

MetalDart responds:

This got me marks in my Japanese class by creativity. I was supposed to research a city, so I made this cartoon out of randomness. My teacher loved it, and so did my classmates. It was awesome.

Thanks for the kind review. <3

[XperimentalXperimentation]

Suprisingly good,

I was expecting that to be another pile of crap from someone saying "I haven't finished this yet!" but actually it was rather awesome. YOu need to finish something man these are amazing.

pillowbasher responds:

Seeing how good reviews THIS is getting, then I'm thinking about maybe bringing some of these characters back and do something with them.
Thanks

[Team Sandwich 1 DX]

THat's what I'm talking about!

This is what all flash movies should be about; cartoon boobs and crazy ass penguins beating up evil giant dinosaurs.

edude77 responds:

Shizzle my nizzle.

[Team Sandwich 2 - Part 2]

I love this movie.

The characters are brilliant, the villains villainous, the music fits too. Generally fantastic.

edude77 responds:

I love you. Make sweet love to me.

[The Old Man: Episode 1]

That was sweet mofo!

I liked that, I wish I owned a gangsta style fast-food restaurant.

Stick-Confusion responds:

Everyone does.

[Transformers: S T I D]

Shame on you!

You have besmerched the good names of TRANSFORMERS and MUSE, I seriously hope this is blammed.

amit-patel responds:

i really think the way u care so much about transformers makes you really sad.

sorry bout the muse but get a life.

i like you pic tho, it hilarious.