MellowScholar's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Unleashed: Prelude]

Pretty good, nice idea, but lacking.

I like this, the story seems good, the graphics were nice, animation was good and the music was great!
But this movie desperately needs voices, it would make it absolutely fantastic.
I'm looking forward to seeing this continued.

[Tom's Wedding Day!]

Pretty nice.

The artwork was pretty good, I like the style. But I'd enjoy it more if a few things were different. I thought that the characters were a little static, they should move and gesture a bit as they speak. The music needed to be a bit quieter in parts and the voices more emotive so they'd be easier to hear. Overall it was nice, be great if it was longer. Well done on the frontpage.

Rudy responds:

Thank you. I think it hit Front Page since it's for Tom's wedding and all -- but that's probably really the real reason.

[La'Film Noir]

Nice idea.

But here's some pointers:
-Try not to use FLAs, it's nice when the styles match, it gives the movie a more unified feel,
-Definitely needs subtitles and for the music to be quieter, I'm used to speakonia and I could barely understand the characters,
-Your 'old movie effect' movie clip needs more frames and subtlety.

It seems like a lot but I'm just trying to help.

SandRaspberryClock responds:

I will try my best to fo so in the next one.

[Hiroshima and You]

Hmmm

I like this for some reason but I wish some things were different, like the sound quality could be better.
Also, how did this get you any marks for your japanese class? Just out of interest.
Good fun though, I liked it.

MetalDart responds:

This got me marks in my Japanese class by creativity. I was supposed to research a city, so I made this cartoon out of randomness. My teacher loved it, and so did my classmates. It was awesome.

Thanks for the kind review. <3

[Santa and the Hebrew]

Very cool.

I like the animation and art a lot, reminds me of some anime animations in a similar vein.
But the bit near the start needs to have the text on the screen for less time and better spelling but that's nothing really so well done!

[Team Sandwich 1 DX]

THat's what I'm talking about!

This is what all flash movies should be about; cartoon boobs and crazy ass penguins beating up evil giant dinosaurs.

edude77 responds:

Shizzle my nizzle.

[Team Sandwich 2 - Part 2]

I love this movie.

The characters are brilliant, the villains villainous, the music fits too. Generally fantastic.

edude77 responds:

I love you. Make sweet love to me.